Digital ;
Personally, it doesn't look much like a zebra, the legs were too thin the patterns were way too (Through lack of a better word) 'blobby' the lines weren't crisp enough. A lot needed changing. Talking to Luke helped me understand that the anatomy was off as he instantly jumped on it and gave me some Cc.
The second revision was ;
As you can see the pattern now looks a lot crisper, the overall anatomy looks 'slightly' better. The legs still being WAY off. The third and final revision fixed these problems and against the lined background i personally believe works very well.
Final revision ; (Kind of)
Anatomy is somewhat fixed, lines are even more sharp and clear, tail added, proportions thrown around to make it more realistic. This is the final version of the 3 and if you look at the first one (which i'm now quite embarrased about) you'll see a vast improvement. It no longer looks like a Mr blobby Zebra and now a clean crisp nice looking Zebra.
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